This was just plain clever.
And then taking a picture of himself with a duckface :V
Awesome animation. There was no real point to it or story behind, but it was fun to watch.
The melodies are hitting quite a few false notes. The beat is kinda bland. The mellow pitch changing lead is kindof unfitting. Either that or the drums are. It's decent, I smell potential.
I cant seem to find the false notes :P but ty for your rewiew!
Some of the sounds are a bit too 'dry' for my taste. The melodies are flawless, sample choices are decent. 4.5/5 and rated 5/5.
I didn't vote because I dislike voting 3 or lower but eh,
it was pretty bad to be honest.
The lead you use, at for example 1:44 is very hardstyle-like while trance has to be smooth. The bassline is very basic but it fits. The melody is just very bland and seriously the lead kills everything. You are using quite a few layers and some are faded in the back when the lead starts playing(the bass effects), which gives a pretty ugly effect. At 1:30 you attempt to start a drop, but it build down isn't done probarly(it's like a really weird part inbetween the song).
It's also really really quick which makes me think even more; shouldn't this be in the hardstyle(which is techno) genre? The melody is not really smooth either, you hit quite a few wrong keys.
But hey, we all started like this, just keep up the work and you'll get better!
Thanks for the review!
To be honest, since I was really unfamiliar with this entire side of EDM in general, I didn't quite know if it'd be trance or not. I just went on my rather vague knowledge of the genre and asked my friend to be sure. Ended up naming it trance to be safe. If I had known this would be more hardstyle, I would have said that o;
Well, the melody had to be bland to an extent really. My teacher wanted us to remix the anthem but still be able to hear the main melody clearly. If you meant how I already remixed it, than I'll definitely try to mix it up a whole lot more. Though I'm not sure how I hit too many wrong notes, as my teacher gave us a sheet with the main melody of O Canada on it, and I stuck to the notation of it except for a few parts. If you meant those, then I apologize.
Everything else, I'll definitely keep in mind the next time I try out trance (or hardstyle I suppose). I wasn't trying to make excuses. Just replying to what you said.
Again, thanks for the criticism. I really do appreciate it! At least I still have time to tweak it before I hand it in (:
wow shit looks cash man
Nice. Though 2 pointers:
The body, taille, is just way too narrow. She'd break in two by just 1 hit :P
It also looks kinda stupid in my eyes.
Then her teeth are a bit odd also, you're looking a bit from above and you can clearly see the molar teeth. Bit of a perspective issue.
Still worth 4/5 fo sho
I love the design and style overall. The proportions are a bit off though. The head and foot are just too small.
Defenitely worth my 4/5 stars neverthless :>
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